- I established in the 1st sentence that the candidate has the required experience.
- Transitioned to the 2nd sentence and talked about leadership.
- Finally, I closed with the phrase “bridges the gap”, which has strong visual ties. This is designed to help the hiring manager see a positive mental image, right away.
Combat Veteran? You’re Hired!
Let me begin by saying, thank you for your service. My husband was in the Navy, my father-in-law served in the Army (and was injured) during Vietnam, and I have a deep respect for our armed forces. In fact, I really like to give discounts to veterans, so please be sure to ask about that when you contact me.
If you’re a veteran and reading this, you probably need help with your resume. It can be really hard to translate skills learned in combat – practiced on military bases – or on a naval carrier into language that the private sector can understand.
Option #1 – There is one set of experts that recommend stripping your professional history of as much military-related experience as you can. I disagree.
Option #2 – Another set of experts recommends translating everything into private sector language. Diffusing and neutralizing IEDs is just NOT the same as saying “effectively managed workplace conflict.” I think it loses something in the translation, don’t you? Again, I disagree.
Option #3 – You might even have the kind of resume filled to the brim with acronyms and jargon. I have to be honest when I say that that kind of resume will probably not get you a private sector job anywhere other than as a military contractor. In my opinion, too much jargon will probably not help you reach your employment goal.
Instead of following down the predictable path like everyone else (I love the word “sheeple”), I prefer a totally different approach. I believe that there is a balance somewhere in the middle. A balance where jargon is explained, not eliminated. In my opinion, stripping all the acronyms and jargon away completely excludes valuable experience. Time spent in service should be front and center on a resume, not hidden!
Begin with the executive summary. For example – “Decisive construction manager with 6 years of hands-on field experience and 3 years of experience as a virtual engineer. Capitalizes on strong leadership and communication skills gained as a Marine NCO to create consensus and resolve clashes between disciplines. Bridges the gap between field personnel/subcontractors and architects/designers, and uses 3D visualizations to save both time and money.”
What I’ve done is to establish strong leadership potential right away using our collective bias that military personnel already have well-developed management and communication skills.
